Today, I worked with Peggy and Delisa. They are also have a hard time to write research questions and thesis. Peggy pointed out my research questions need to be one question instead of three similar questions. Delisa gives me a ideas what would be my revised research question.
Revised research question: What efforts did United Nations put on to prevent global poverty and what is limitation of their efforts?
Revised thesis statement: United Nations have many programs that focusing on reduce poverty around the world. For example, UNICEF helped many poor countries children by send aid to those countries. However, lack of sufficient fund and donor countries self-interest disturb this activities.
The one thing that I figured out was I need more preliminary search about this topic.
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Excellent, David.
ReplyDeleteRight now, it's Monday night, and I will review your proposal tomorrow (Tuesday) morning, and send it back to you.
I'm very much looking forward to your project this semester. =)