As both Jen and Mrs. Medley pointed out, I need to explain little bit more deeply about each limitation. For improve the point of limitation, I'm thinking about give an example of each limitation to help people to understand it better. Also, there are couple of things that I'm planning to do for enhance my point in MM webtext. First of all, after economic poverty explanation, I'm going to describe why economic poverty is big issue and give example of country that indicate this situation. Second, I am planning to reword some of the limitations, add new aspects and details to each of limits. finally, I am planning to improve my conclusion by providing suggestion of future relief activities.
Both Instructor conference and peer review was great encourage to me because I felt that I'm on right on track for everything. When I was try to finish my 1000 words webtext, I felt exact opposite feeling so, it was great to have the time to revised my current work. Also, Jen's peer review was give me a possible direction that I can consider about so, it was very helpful for me.
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Oh no, don't feel nervous or anything about what you've done so far. Your text is excellent, and the direction you want to go with it is solid.
ReplyDeleteI'm very much looking forward to your final product at the end of the semester. =)