Today, Jennifer give some good suggestion that helps me to improve my 1000 words webtext. She thinks that I am on right track for the small stuff like chunk paragraph and images. However, she points out that makes a hyperlink on organization like World Food Programme and International Monetary Fund so that people who want to know more about the organization can get information about it. Also, she gives me good reword suggestion of sentence that I struggles on wording.
For the rhetorical appeals, we are both agrees that I used combination of all three appeals on my webtext. Also, we are agree that pathos is the strongest one because the image that I used touches people emotions. However, I also thinks that logos is stronger like pathos because the information that I provide is not always approach to people emotion.
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